308      so his head bent slack to one side beneath the helm’s weight. because it functions to establish balance. while Patroclus receives proper burial. daughter. supernatural agency, just as is any departure from the normal behaviour of Homer used two different verbs to describe the head motion in 306 and 308, but Lattimore ignored Homer’s words and chose one of his favorites (bent) for both lines. killing Trojans three times. identity becomes so merged with Achilles' during his last battle.11 These obscure 327      with men struggling, wives because of, their own! Hector the destructive anger that brought ten-thousand pains to the 783-89). There is a fourth embassy and offer of ransom at the end of the Iliad. 16. immortal armor in order to be killed as a substitute for Achilles, now He is the Five use the same mistranslation in line 4, by stating that souls (lives) are “hurled” to Hades instead of “sent.”. 259). to its view of the cosmos as in a state of complex balance until He is certainly less faithful than Lattimore. A thunderbolt is lightning. Rage: sing, Goddess, Achilles’ rage, . 35). Richmond Lattimore (1951) divine point of view, only a radical realignment of their relationship can It appears 20 times in the Iliad and literally means GOD-DECLARED, something a god would create by declaration. 324      morsels, after she would grab, and bad then for her it becomes on herself. This aversion, which she shares with many other English translators, seems to stem from a modern notion that repetition is redundant and dull. The narrator comments god; consequently forgiveness, or the resolution of a human/divine crisis, 323      For as to her unwinged young ones the mother bird brings back Achilles uses the 3rd person and a proverbial tone in lines 318-20 to elevate his personal complaint to a level of moral principal. 99-110) be.'" Now Agamemnon himself sends an embassy. Patroclus When            as    and      a bird       for unfledged      young          would bear forth, 324      mastak,’    epei          ke  labesi,      kakoos      d’     ara       oi                pelei              aute, . knowing full well that Hector must die, addresses his fellow gods, as if Both Coward and hero get the same reward: In these terms both Achilles and Agamemnon are very much to blame pyres. William F. Wyatt, Loeb Library (1999) 11. Calchas. This is done so that the text may look and read like verse, but while stacked prose mimics verse, a line of verse shows a strict poetic structure and forms a unit of composition, a line in stacked prose does not. and the brave. of many Greeks, but that would not produce the human/divine crisis of the Iliad. It is meant to appeal to the popular commercial market as a pleasure to read, and to be a much greater aid in the study of Homer at schools and universities. difficult for some Greeks to understand by the time of Plato. creates a state of imbalance in the entire cosmos, among the gods as well Patroclus’ magnitude increases until he is godlike in his ability to from the gods.2 In such a human/divine crisis, the disorder of fighting with warriors for their woman’s sake. Verity is English.                 – Julius Caesar by Wm. of Homer, trans. Endnotes individual episodes and from the very pattern of the poem, determined as 168-76) It is the role of Zeus to create any morsel she may find, but with herself it goes ill, To avoid confusion from this disconnection, it is important to translate 320 exactly as written in Greek. Mendelsohn, Lattimore and myself were able to translate this simile in six lines, because we were under word constraints imposed by Homer’s line structure. for the dishonor he has suffered. whether we shall save him from death, or now at length shall slay him, 325      so I too have passed many sleepless nights. eager to do battle with Achilles" (Il. heroes from destroying itself, is evident from the content of many In lines 2, 3 and 4, Homer uses plain, direct verbs, which mean simply: put, sent, and made. Wyatt did not preserve the participles as parallels (heavy and weighed down), but did make head in 306 the subject and bowed the verb to create a parallel wording with 308. prudence and rituals which serve to protect people from the gods. The main theme of the Iliad is stated in the first line, as Homer asks the Muse to sing of the "wrath of Achilles." produced by a man's emotions and by the influence of a god, or the tradition of the genteel or minor faults of Hector, which are those of an poet as willfully deceptive” (21). Agamemnon's anger is not irrevocable; he is able by means of the proper does not understand the plan of Zeus, nor the sacrifice that he is making and in a lawful manner. fates of grievous death, one for Achilles, and one for horse-taming 3          and many worthy lives to Hades sent forth In Homer's Iliad, the lead character is the quintessential Greek hero, Achilles. whose debt to the gods Patroclus must now pay. the mustering out of the violent emotions that have drawn the gods down and the Plan of Zeus. Wyatt does, however, show a fidelity to the parallel style of Homer’s similes. extreme, even for this poem about the wills of the gods exercised upon the “shame-culture,” not a “guilt-culture” (17). Agamemnon sends men to fetch Briseis from Achilles, who relinquishes 325      such was I, as I lay through all the many nights unsleeping. anger of Chryses against Agamemnon produces the plague from Apollo. 439          deina       d’         homoklesas            prosephe           ekaergos           Apollon: . . between man and god”  (The 321      ou     de       ti      moi        perikeitai,        epei       pathon         algae      thymos Zeus. . does indeed learn that it is better to exercise self-control, if possible. resulting cosmic disorder is wonderfully represented in the Iliad She then uses all four remaining standard mistranslations and follows every feature of the prosaic route for word order. . might, in recompense for this--that in no wise shalt thou return from out where conflicts can be resolved without violence. . Measures that must be taken to achieve it drive the plot of the Iliad and bring grief to many on both sides, especially to Achilles himself. catastrophic results. 796      e          ra         th’        hypo       brovtes        patros      Dios    eisi    pedov    de. Achilles is evidently tired from so fates of grievous death, one for Achilles, and one for horse-taming characters are free to decide and are responsible for their decisions” (The .                                    Apollo’s voice, saying to him: drives Patroclus to excess and death because of the excesses of Achilles, That puts him on the wrong side of Zeus, not a good place to be, and he will suffer for it. 24. between man and god”  (The Homer refers to the dead heroes with the pronoun autous, which means themselves, and can be perfectly translated with the English pronoun “them.” For Homer, a dead person is that person, though dead. 503).”. I will not repeat Mendelsohn’s praise for the sound effects by Fagles, who was a scholar at Princeton University. the murderous wrath of the Iliad, but he was too powerful to kill, 319      and in one honor, whether bad or good. and in a lawful manner. drives Patroclus to his death, yet Patroclus is responsible in some Patroclus and Hector are killed by the direct involvement of gods and for had he observed the word of the son of to its view of the cosmos as in a state of complex balance until Consequently, Agamemnon’s anger is especially is organized according to geometric principles of opposition and balance: New York: Octagon Books, This plan shows a any morsels she finds, and herself goes hungry, After What least thing have I. the Greeks, so that Agamemnon "'may know his blindness in that he But when for the men, that is killing them. Of heroes into Hades’ dark, 797: The word misgetai is a common one for Homer, which only and always means mix or MINGLE. Verity breaks away from the herd and confirms my claims. There is a general Apollo leaves Hector and Athena comes to Achilles. death of Hector will being to reestablish this balance and separation.16. He is not disillusioned with the promise of honor. word “shame” to describe the state of having done something wrong, producing woes for the Trojans in many future Troy stories. Using “soul” in 1:3, forces translators to adulterate Homer’s text in 1:4 with further theological anachronisms about mortal remains. Dr. Diane P. Thompson the precondition for Achilles' own death. exchanges his armor for the armor of Achilles. "`Come now, ye leaders and rulers of the Argives, judge ye aright Line 306 contains the first part, both the vehicle (as a poppy) and object (to one side he cast his head). end of life appear; for Phoebus met thee in the fierce conflict, an awful            a poppy    and    as      to one side    his head      he cast,      one      (and)       in       a garden. Agamemnon, attempting to ransom his daughter, who is held by Agamemnon as An example is the clumsy wording in line 442. Mendelsohn had a poor opinion of his sound effects, but made one statement which goes to the heart of the matter: “What I like best about Mitchell’s version is its strong five-beat rhythm – arguably the best yet in English.” Mendelsohn faulted Mitchell for “a general heightening of diction – “attacked” for “went in,” “swoops down” for “goes,” “countless” for “many.” The word “fury,” Mendelsohn states, misses the meaning of Homer’s thespesioi homadoi. 1. 322      constantly risking my life in warfare. 796      e          ra         th’        hypo       brovtes        patros      Dios    eisi    pedov    de, . It is very knowable and achieved in a few days. types of goodness but simply as embodiments of power who govern human The helmet causes nothing and adds no meaning. Stephen Mitchell (2011) For Homer, “the son of Peleus” is an epithet that specifies who Achilles is. 321      I have endured pain in my heart, always risking my life in battle, My new translation, however, takes a scrupulous approach that goes far beyond all previous translations in terms of fidelity and quality. sooth a well-loved man do mine eyes behold pursued around the wall; and my the Humanities, ed. Ares … and his limbs were filled within with valour and with might" From the The struggle is on, culminating in produced by a man's emotions and by the influence of a god, or the Menelaus angrily demands judgment from the leaders of the Greeks: responsible for disaster, if one dislikes the term guilt applied to Classical Library (1925; rpt. The epic states that it is the story of the wrath of Achilles. those who are close to the gods, priests and semi-divine heroes such as but also gives clear examples of men exercising self-control and of an 122). Specifically, The Iliad concerns itself with the rage of Achilles—how it begins, how it cripples the Achaean army, and how it finally becomes redirected toward the Trojans. I deemed that I should not make an end of mine anger until the hour when 16. Hector's death will end the wrath, but it will bring no joy His wrath is must be mediated by the emotions of human beings, just as the original might, in recompense for this--that in no wise shalt thou return from out 441     to make yourself like the gods in mind, since never the same is So The The word “soul” cannot be used in place of “life.” Achilles cannot say he was risking his soul. Ἰλιάς ; Ὀδύσσεια = The Iliad and Odyssey, Homer The Iliad is an ancient Greek epic poem in dactylic hexameter, traditionally attributed to Homer. This reintegrates Achilles back into human society from which he verbal, the suspense remains the same. 320      a man dies just the same, whether he has done much or nothing, Later, at the start of Book Two, after all had gone to bed for the night: 2:3                But he (Zeus) pondered within his mind that Achilles 799      billow, frothing, before others, but after others, .                                              Down he strode, and his coming was like the night. . I more thoroughly discuss this concern in my article: The Nature of Homer’s Gods, Rescuing their Reputations from the Scholars, which is also available on this website. His stated priorities are: a line-by-line adherence to the original with declaimable lines of 5 or 6 stresses. Achilles Peleus, he would verily have escaped the evil fate of black death. vast system of smaller ones … gives shape to the separate parts” (97). The subject he, instead of head, is now weighed down by his helmet, which does not make sense. Several Greek words are roots for English words, such as theo (god), iso (equal), homo (same) and anthrop (man).Â. Body and soul (lines 3 and 4): Nearly every translator starting with Alexander Pope in 1720 has chosen to translate the Greek word psyche in line 1:3 as “soul” in accord with their modern theological notions, which causes a problem, because a Homeric psyche is in no way a soul. Is the subject of The Iliad the wrath of Achilles? New York: Norton, 1964], 194). on the disparity between Hector’s glory and his actual deeds: “the meet him; and Apollo took his stand behind him, and smote his back and 318      the fate is the same if a man hangs back, and if he battles greatly, The very equality of Agamemnon and Achilles in are the events that initiate the plague and the wrath. The quarrel between Agamemnon and Achilles—Achilles withdraws from the war, and sends his mother Thetis to ask Jove to help the Trojans—Scene between Jove and Juno on Olympus. become actively involved. 210-12). The gods are still Achilles responds to Patroclus' request to go out and fight rage; nay, even I beg thee to let go thine anger against Achilles, who is Thetis laid out a plan to restore her son’s honor. 96). Twelve cities of men, Green more than the others supplants Homer’s words with his own modern judgmental terms. his plan, humans can no longer simply make amends. identity becomes so merged with Achilles' during his last battle.11 actions initiate events in the Iliad. occurring for not one, but for two or more reasons, such as anger being events happen in the Iliad. are most vulnerable to multiple or sacred causation when their passions 849-54). sank the day of doom of Hector, and departed unto Hades" (Il. But Patroclus and Hector must appear sufficiently guilty (or Homeric Gods, trans. but also gives clear examples of men exercising self-control and of an Agamemnon needed to accept the ransom and release the daughter of Chryses, the Trojans needed to return Helen and Achilles needed to yield his wrath, though all would have lost something they personally desired more. instead of Achilles. . 16. they do not fit the intentions of the gods. he should never have petitioned Zeus to allow the Trojans to kill the for all the Achaeans a mighty bulwark of evil war" (Il. immortal armor made for him by Hephaestus and complete the violence of the will accept it whenso Zeus willeth to bring it to pass'" (Il. Zeus observes doomed Hector 319      in equal honor are both coward and warrior; Green translates boule in line 5 as “plan,” but adds a footnote to explain that this is not the plan devised by Thetis and Zeus. Further, Achilles accepts responsibility for the Howbeit these things will we let be, as past and done. That I now provide, thus opening the eyes of everyone regarding already published versions. Chryses came to Agamemnon offering a worthy ransom for the return of his daughter. among the gods against Achilles' behavior. excellence becomes that of a fleeing animal. 16. Greatly-roaring would have mega as a prefix, and does not specify repetition. A soul to a modern reader is an immaterial, yet essential part of a living person. 3. until the Greeks show honor to Achilles and give him gifts to compensate On the fourth advance, Apollo struck him (Il. The end of 306 and the whole of 307 contain the second part of the vehicle, which explains that the poppy droops to one side because it is heavy with seed and moisture. This, too, will restore balance, since Achilles ultimately offense was produced by human emotions. 275-84). his temper and because Achilles, via Thetis, petitioned Zeus for revenge.19. 19. Hector plans to reestablish balance and the appropriate separation between gods I deemed that I should not make an end of mine anger until the hour when This fury. will accept it whenso Zeus willeth to bring it to pass'" (Il. but now again is goodly Achilles pursuing him with swift feet around Against Mitchell’s champion passage, I now submit below a faithful word-for-word translation, in which the original meaning, form and order of each word remains scrupulously preserved: .                                                John Prendergast 327      striving with warriors for the sake of these men’s women. Apollo in the first place.           with men            struggling           wives          because of,          their own. had been warned by Achilles to drive the Trojans back from the ships, but Homer uses argeleon 34 times in the Iliad, and it must have a general meaning. 101-8).            wrath     sing,    Goddess,   of the son of Peleus,    of Achilles, 2          oulomenen,   e         mupi               Achaiois           alge    etheke 319      in equal honor are both coward and warrior; 320      and they die alike, both the man who has done nothing and he who has. Agamemnon acknowledges that Nestor is correct, yet           with seed          being heavy        showers       and        of spring. Keep in mind that Mendelsohn’s purpose was to compare the SOUNDS in the Greek to the sounds in three published, 796: The storm-cloud is beneath the THUNDER of Father Zeus. 1. disturbed by violence spreading outward from Agamemnon and Achilles; the system is called the plan of Zeus; it is inexorable; it is deadly; it But why? but it’s all starvation wages for herself. 320      he dies the same, he the unworked man and he the much worked? . Humans do not interbreed with bugs. The word “soul” is completely out of place in Homeric epic. 796      that underneath the thunderstroke of Zeus-Father drives downward 18. 8:307   karpo               brithomene          notiesi         te         eiarinesin And his head bowed to one side like a poppy that in a garden . However, he follows other translators with “coward” and “brave” in place of bad and good. is the emotion that disturbs the distance between human beings and the 1. It is at this point, when After Achilles, aided by Athena, has fatally wounded Apollo .                                    50      The mules first he went on and frisky dogs, to Achilles, who knows he will die soon after.17. His style is a modern one, rapid, plain and direct, anything in the way gets tossed: epithets, words, phrases, lines, whole passages, one whole book. Zeus’ plan (line 5): The Greek word boule in line 1:5 means “plan,” a specific course of action intended to achieve a short-term result. Lattimore’s choice of “bent” loses this artistry. the ancient Greeks, Homer enjoyed a reputation as something between Holy as the passions of men calm down and the gods recede from human affairs. 1978], 158-159). Invoking the Goddess and requesting that she sing is a claim by the singer that his words are inspired by a Muse, a goddess of Music and daughter of Zeus by the goddess of Memory. Such introductions in such a manner are traditional for this oral art. 22. 326      and bloody days I passed through battling, the final victim of the plan of Zeus, strips the body of Patroclus and is a kind, gentle man. rolled beneath the feet of the horses--the crested helm; and the plumes Achilles pays for his wrath; the death of Hector is the price the Trojans from mistake or force majeure: only the result is taken into account” so was I used to watch through many a sleepless night, . Son of Atreus, do thou check thy 6. of “Human Responsibility and the Fall of Troy,” Diss. punish the Greeks. What makes stacked prose different from prose is that after the text starts at the left margin it only goes on for a set number of syllables before breaking to start the next line. fighting with men on account of their wives. evaluation of the situation whether the failure results from cowardice, or 319      get the same share; coward and brave are equally honoured; Mitchell then merges lines 325-326 so that the ten-line passage ends up as nine lines in a style that is rapid, plain and direct in thought and expression, and with a fidelity to Homer that is similar to the translations which aim to keep close to the original Greek. Achilles will receive threefold rewards in the future if he controls Achilles' the Homeric age but the prudential morality of the historic period. But Agamemnon refused, earning him the vengeance of Chryses backed up by the wrath of Apollo. 526-27). 799: The waves are after others, but before others in terms of both time and space. emotions and of the right separation between humans and gods has been In Greek classical works, epic poets often invoke the help of the gods to assist them in their objectives. Fitzgerald did not intend to produce a literal translation, but in this passage he correctly conveys the complaint of Achilles about not receiving any portion or respect. Robert Fagles (1990) Earlier in Book One, a wrathful Achilles had pledged to withdraw from the fighting after he was dishonored by Agamemnon, the Achaean king. 325      so I too have passed many nights without sleeping, and She then must repeat “wrath” as part of the first line. . of the group of which one is the head. . This mistranslation is another attempt to convey the mistaken idea that Achilles is disillusioned with the values of his society, an idea that can only be conveyed with a mistranslation. Fitzgerald puts his lines in iambic pentameter and strives for an elevated and poetic tenor, but his translation is clearly in stacked prose with an iambic cadence. causes are not immediately perceived, whether by the subject’s own be ultimately controlled by the plan of Zeus, requiring the deaths of between man and god, this fear that any presumption on the part of man may resolution, human actions will be largely determined by the terrible plan The death of Hector, killed by both a god and a man, will be the blasting down with the Father’s thunder, loosed on earth I will only quote five of his statements that go to the heart of the matter. and carrion birds, as the will of Zeus was accomplished. Fulfillment of the plan thus became a cosmic necessity. must die to restore balance in the world. Hera fastened, or engaged, her horses to a yoke. Achilles is just as dangerous to the Greeks as he is to the for his error in not properly leading the Trojans and debates within into Patroclus' belly for the final stroke of death. This 3      agonies and hurled many mighty shades of heroes to Hades,* Achilles' wrath is violence run wild within the society of the Greeks. Are the chicks cowards and slackers? Does the mother suffer hardship for profit? to a compromise that would benefit all of the Greeks. dogs from thy head'" (Il. Patroclus 18. No published translator below does so. All references are to the line numbers of the Greek text, so may strife perish from among gods and men, Fagles uses modern words, phrases and interpretations and adulterates Homer’s text with inferior and bombastic material from his own imagination that draws attention to itself while drowning out and distracting from Homer’s narrative. .                                              First he attacked the mules and the dogs, but soon In the decades before Lattimore, popular translations of the Iliad read like novels, like Wyatt’s version. of “Human Responsibility and the Fall of Troy,” Diss. man closest to Achilles; they are like brothers. By mistranslating the pronoun in 321 as “profit,” rather than having it correctly refer back to “respect,” Mitchell misses what is bothering Achilles. good man though he be, by the hand of Achilles, son of Pelleus." He Nilsson comments that daughter and performing ritual sacrifices will the Greeks appease Apollo's A vehicle is always in the present tense and separate from the object scene. But the word means: numerous and close together IN TIME, not in space. Apollo had diverted Achilles away Greeks. murderous, doomed, that cost the Achaeans countless losses, of warriors, and made the men themselves to be the spoils for dogs reputation of Hektor continually surpasses his achievement. When he stood on a shore and saw a storm approach from the sea with the winds and surf picking up, the thunder he heard came from the heavens, from the mighty rain-god, Lord of Heaven, who delights in thunder. The sentences below say the same thing. shall a longing for Achilles some day come upon the sons of the Achaeans               equal to     wish      to be minded,    since     not    ever       tribe      is the same, 442         athanaton        te       theon             chamai             erchomenon      t’       anthropon.” and the god Hephaestus (fire). thou hast wrought, as surely as there lives no man that shall ward off the .               439    and, terribly having called out, spoke forth the worker from afar, Apollo: anger of Chryses against Agamemnon produces the plague from Apollo. self-control over his emotions, telling his mother, "`Howbeit these and the dual (or multiple) causation of a system that describes events as I will not repeat Mendelsohn’s praise for the sound effects by Fagles, who was a scholar at Princeton University.         which   then   (and)   beneath    thunder    of Father   Zeus   goes   plain  toward, 797      thespesio      d’             homado                   ali             misgetai,     en        de        te       polla, .       god-declared  and   into commotion    with salt sea   mingles,   within   and   (and)   many, 798      kumata    paphlazovta     polyphloisboio     thalasses, . or fight on with all our strength in the front lines of battle; cowards and brave men are treated with equal respect. 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